The roosters had started crowing
early this morning; well maybe it just seemed that way because I’d gone to bed
late. Those darned chickens had been causing a ruckus and Noah and I had
discovered a fox attempting to break into the hen house. We’d chased it away
and then after checking the girls, I discovered that Noah’s part time worker
had used regular wire instead of the galvanized hardware cloth I’d bought for
that particular project. Brad’s mistake had almost cost me my sweet girls and
my best egg layer, Mildred.
Anger had me vibrating and I could actually feel my hands
shaking. My husband and I had spent the next five hours putting the galvanized
cloth in place to keep out any other predators. It was a temporary measure
until everything could be done properly in the morning light.
I’d been running my mouth because I was so angry and was just surprised Noah hadn’t chucked me in the pond. I was kind of getting used
to it. It wasn’t his fault and I’d wanted to apologize to him, but since
I was still angry it wouldn’t have sounded sincere; I decided to wait until morning.
God had gifted us with another beautiful day. Morning had
come with breathless beauty once again. Our bedroom window was open and faced
the rising sun and while Peppy and Miguel did their crowing, I took in a great,
big breath of the fresh air that gently drifted in our window. As the rising
sun touched the flowers, trees and grass it brought everything to startling
life. The colors of the flowers; the beautiful reds, blues, violets and the
eye-popping yellows and oranges just fairly shouted, “Look at us!” The yellow
and green zucchini’s, the rich, red, succulent tomatoes and bright green
skinned watermelons tempted me to bite into them and the water in the pond
sparkled like cool, wet diamonds as it reflected the sun, while the soft sounds
of the chickens, roosters and cows soothed me.
The smells were amazing every day, but oh my, in the early
mornings, just as the sun was rising and with the wind blowing, the smells were
so wonderfully vibrant and they would flow gently over me and kiss me good morning.
My happy sigh was so big it shook the whole bed and Noah’s smooth
arm came around me and hugged me to him tightly. Turning, I buried my face in
his chest and mumbled, “ I’m sorry.” A sudden chuckle brought my eyes up to his
and I found them sparkling with laughter and love.
“My love, you are amazing! I’ll never grow tired of living
my life with you. You make each day so exciting,” he chuckled again and rubbed
his hairy chin over my cheeks.
My face reddened and his grin grew bigger, then he rolled
over and swatted my hind end, “Come on it’s time to get up. It’s gonna be super
busy today. I’ll make sure the hen’s garden run is put together right and then
I’ll join you and our momma’s so’s we can pick all them tomatoes.” The day
passed a mite too slowly for me; I really wanted to see my Noah’s face. He
reminded me a bit of a young, handsome Grizzly Adams.
The time finally came to pick tomatoes and you’d a thought it
was a party. Lots of family members and friends; adults and children had shown
up to help and we all worked hard and steady under the hot sun. Every once in a
while I’d hear a giggle and I knew another tomato had disappeared down
somebody’s gullet, but I cannot tell a lie I enjoyed a bite or two myself.
An hour or so towards sunset I heard another sound I really
enjoyed. I knew momma would soon be singing one of the many songs I’d grown up
with whenever we worked in the fields. My momma’s sweet, husky voice called the
kids over to her and they sat by the truck with cool watermelon juice and she
began to sing, “Every day with Jesus is sweeter than the day before. Every day
with Jesus, I love Him more and more. Jesus saves and keeps me and He’s the one
I’m waiting for. Every day with Jesus is sweeter than the day before.”
We finally finished, but left enough on the vines for the
neighbors or any visitors that would be stopping by tomorrow to pick. Noah set
up a nice little bonfire area, brought out the grill and we sat around and sang
more songs and reminisced about our younger days. As usual my big brother Abel
brought up the first time Noah had thrown me in the pond; not something I
wanted to remember.
“Hey Abe!” Noah called out, “don’t leave right away, cuz
I’m gonna punch your lights out for messing with my pearl!” Everyone laughed,
but Abe had gotten the hint and shut his mouth right quick.
I loved sunrise, but sunset was pretty special too; here
surrounded by family and friends, feeling pleasantly tired after a hard days
work, my husband’s arms around me, the smells of the night and the
occasional soft moo of the cows, the chirp of crickets and the giggling and
laughter of kids I was content. I sighed big and my husband’s arms tightened
around me and I felt his kiss on my head as I joined in the singing.
This is written
for: Bluebell Books Twitter Club Thursday Short Story Slam Week 26:
also shared with: Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 72 (September 5 -12, 2012) at:
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2012/09/thursday-poets-rally-week-72-september.html
Thanks for the opportunity!
amazing story.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the visit and the comment Tifiny. Praying God's blessings on you. :-)
Deletea day by day account or record, love the details, sharp and lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and commenting Taylor. Much of this was from my childhood memories. Enjoyed writing it. Be blessed.
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Deletevery nicely written! Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankush! So glad you could visit and comment. Appreciate your time. Blessings.
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ReplyDeleteFascinating story. At least there was a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.
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Deletea talented story.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and comment Silverfox. Have blessed weekend! :-)
DeleteBeautiful story. Very well written. I love all the details and the way you describe them, about the farming life, the marriage, family and community experience. I can see and feel it all in my mind, from your words.
ReplyDeleteI invite you to visit my blog to see my Rally entry:
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Elaine thank you so much for visiting and commenting. I was hoping that whomever read this piece would be able to see it, like a mini movie, in their heads. Most of this came from my experiences on my grandparent's farm when I was quite small. All I have to do is close my eyes and I'm right back there again. Praying that you have a wonderfully blessed weekend!:-)
DeleteYou have done a lovely job illustrating farm life, relationships, and more! Thank you for sharing it. I love your blog!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and comment Shaunda. So appreciate the time you took to read this. Praying God's wonderful blessings on you. :-)
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ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and commenting Nataeven. Yes, farm life can be loads of fun, but it's also lots of hard work, but it's so worth it. Blessings to you.
Deletebeautiful job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and comment Rebecca. Praying that your weekend is blessed.
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