tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post2312091770520668883..comments2023-09-25T03:07:55.832-07:00Comments on Loving My Creator: In Her Gilded CageElizenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-64622392089800564132012-05-24T18:17:29.722-07:002012-05-24T18:17:29.722-07:00Thanks MrWatson! Your visit and comment are welcom...Thanks MrWatson! Your visit and comment are welcomed and much appreciated. Be blessed!Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-3329940743629869812012-05-24T18:16:46.013-07:002012-05-24T18:16:46.013-07:00Thanks for the comment and the visit Fred. I'm...Thanks for the comment and the visit Fred. I'm trying hard to learn other styles of writing, but I've discovered I'm much more comfortable writing the way I speak. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Be blessed.Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-40231312507902343912012-05-24T18:15:14.573-07:002012-05-24T18:15:14.573-07:00Thanks for your visit and the comment. I know it s...Thanks for your visit and the comment. I know it sounds cheesy, but I write what's in my heart and mind at the moment...literally. LOL! Thanks again and many blessings to you and yours. :-)Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-25658333224457758412012-05-24T17:59:02.618-07:002012-05-24T17:59:02.618-07:00Thank you so much for this comment. Wow, what a co...Thank you so much for this comment. Wow, what a compliment! I'm sitting here with a big smile on my face. You've made me feel really great. Be blessed!Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-39363157363713186592012-05-24T17:56:47.932-07:002012-05-24T17:56:47.932-07:00Thanks for the visit and the comment Asim. Really ...Thanks for the visit and the comment Asim. Really do appreciate it. Be blessed!Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-12468990014495814522012-05-24T17:56:14.483-07:002012-05-24T17:56:14.483-07:00Thanks for your visit and comment. Until the very ...Thanks for your visit and comment. Until the very last minute I wasn't quite sure what to write about, then I saw a woman that regularly walks down our street. She forgot herself and caught up to her husband. He stopped on the sidewalk and looked over at her. He was too far for me to see his expression, but her body language said it all. She'd made a mistake and just for a minute she'd tried to be his equal. Her head bent even lower than it had been and she backed up until she was three or four steps behind him. Once she was back in her proper place he started walking again and I wanted to throw something at him. <br />I walked inside, sat at my lap top and this story is what came out of that. Thanks for reading.Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-21983433501806696042012-05-24T17:49:35.900-07:002012-05-24T17:49:35.900-07:00Thanks for the comment Charles! I always look forw...Thanks for the comment Charles! I always look forward to your visits and any advice you can give me to improve my writings. Hope your week has been going well for you and your wife. Be blessed!Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-71681702944141027112012-05-10T20:39:42.266-07:002012-05-10T20:39:42.266-07:00Great write here... Very well penned!Great write here... Very well penned!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-88712259355288085112012-05-07T10:17:05.529-07:002012-05-07T10:17:05.529-07:00Very nicely done. Smoothly written prose, capturi...Very nicely done. Smoothly written prose, capturing a poetic effect. I am a big fan of using questions in the body of prose, really nice touch here. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-89988004910722771202012-05-07T03:15:21.739-07:002012-05-07T03:15:21.739-07:00beautifully penned.. it was a prose piece but i se...beautifully penned.. it was a prose piece but i sensed the poetry behind it. This chain, this never ending chain hurts so much. I had tried my hand in an abstract sort of poem with a similar theme. Just added a fear of undoing some bonds but not all..of holding keys to all but not knowing which goes where..and by the time you attain freedom...you are too tired physically, mentally to bother...<br /><br />http://insatiablemelody.blogspot.in/2011/08/not-so-abstract.html<br /><br /><br />cheers!!Aashihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03124657759822689180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-8135126569818361742012-05-06T20:34:57.471-07:002012-05-06T20:34:57.471-07:00This sounds and reads like spoken poetry. Truly, t...This sounds and reads like spoken poetry. Truly, truly awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-88015521919908575672012-05-06T16:46:46.104-07:002012-05-06T16:46:46.104-07:00What a lovely job! I used to tell people it was h...What a lovely job! I used to tell people it was hard being put on a pedestal, there's not enough room to live on top and you would be a fool to climb down....Sober on the Way to Sanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11521832804187424523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-81201879963933379392012-05-06T16:45:31.315-07:002012-05-06T16:45:31.315-07:00BEAUTIFUL WRITING. I LOVE IT.BEAUTIFUL WRITING. I LOVE IT.Living with Poetry, poems by Asim Kumar Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13517601024278386660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1655615410828803765.post-40883646307906731682012-05-06T16:01:42.811-07:002012-05-06T16:01:42.811-07:00This is beautiful and a most excellent write, Eliz...This is beautiful and a most excellent write, Elizena! You cature the emotions of this situation so perfectly! Well done!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/06/when-the-music-stops/noreply@blogger.com